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Submitted by J.D. (not verified) on May 29, 2007 - 12:20pm.
You've got a good concept and a decent plot. I was looking for something a little better though. you could smooth out a lot of the shots and transitions. the dialogue also needs a little work. try working with a group to get a different voice for each character. I have a friend who had this experience except the guy was 29 and I was sort of expecting better.
You've got a good concept and
You've got a good concept and a decent plot. I was looking for something a little better though. you could smooth out a lot of the shots and transitions. the dialogue also needs a little work. try working with a group to get a different voice for each character. I have a friend who had this experience except the guy was 29 and I was sort of expecting better.